Master Class: Girish Karnad on The Structure of the Play

“A play has to be like a well built house, where every corner – has a solid beam – or a door or a window – Why? Why? Why? You have to go on asking these questions”

Jnanapeeta Award winner Girish Karnad speaks about the struct I am so happy to have come across this video almost by chance. I have been re-reading Girish Karnad’s plays off late and to find this, video where he talks about The Structure of the play was indeed most precious~

Thank you to Sunil Khare who has made this available for all of us.

Karnad ji uses his play Yayati to talk about the straight forward narrative structure of the play.

On the whole, Karnad talks about

  • The differences between dialogue and conversation
  • Persuasion of characters
  • the live nature of play – without a chance to refer back
  • Character motivations

Here are parts of the talk that I found very important for my own study

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Writing a play is a very individual activity, every playwright has his own method, different play wrights do it differently…..

We should be clear what a play is… what is a naatak –?

Usually we associate a play with dialogue. A dialogue is not a conversation. When you go in a train you hear two people talking… you hear, and it is interesting, they are talking, they are fighting, they are proposing or whatever ..and then they get down and go and you forget it.

That is just a conversation between, an exchange of ideas between two people that is … it does not give you an idea of where they came from and where they are going… and you are not interested, you are on your own way somewhere else…

The point of the dialogue is that the audience has come there to listen to dialogues being exchanged by the actors, so the dialogue has to tell the audience, who are these people.. the first thing that the dialogue has to tell people is the characters.

If it is A and B, what is A, what is B. Where does A come from, where does B come from? And because of this… play essentially has… although what happens in a play is what happens in front of you…a past and a future… each character brings a past and a future…. and a good playwright should be able to with each sentence bring out this past and future.

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What does a dialogue do?

This is the second one.. .what are these characters trying to do? Of course they are trying to tell a story. Everyone is interested in a story but, what is actually happening there, in a play ..in any play is .. .one character is trying to persuade the other character to do something. You know there has to be action… people say that there has to be action in a play… but an action doesn’t mean they have to run around on stage, beat each other and this…

The action is in the dialogue, and the action in the dialogue says, that one character should try to persuade, the other character. It may be Manthara trying to persuade Kaikeyi that her son should become a king. It may be someone trying to seduce another person. It may be Lady Mcbeth trying to tell McBeth kill the king, you know.. these are major, well known cases of persuasion, but even in smaller things, little suggestions, little gestures, the whole process of persuasion goes on..

Then there is a second degree of persuasion which happens which is that this dialogue must persuade the audience that it is worth listening to. Otherwise the audience will get bored. So, you know there are two levels of activity going on… the two actors or actresses are trying to persuade each other resisting the persuasion… that is the conflict there. ..the conflict arises because the other person may or may not agree to what persuasion is going on, but even more important is that these two or three characters on stage are trying to persuade the audience, that this scene is worth listening to, the play is worth listening to, and this is important.

That is a basic notion that every playwright has to bear in mind. Then there are other limitations which are typically theatrical limitations. A novel can go on for ever, I mean War and Peace is something – two and a half pages. But a play cant go on forever.

but a play cant go on forever

There was a time when people used to sit through the night to see a play, but then they were allowed to sleep, which is a great advantage which we don’t have, these days. So, today you have to have a play that can go at the most for two and a half hours. You see, because, ultimately what decides the length of a play is the capacity of our bottom muscles. After two and a half hours, the audience wants to go home, to their activity. And this physical thing cannot happen in a novel, or in a poem or in another thing else. You can read it tomorrow. Here (in theatre) it is one continuous activity. So, you have this limitation, that the play has to be two hours long.

Second limitation, is that the play can be seen ideally only by this kind. Say about five hundred and fifty people. It has been decided that after five hundred and fifty or six hundred people, the last man cannot see the facial expressions of the actors. Ultimately people have to be able to see what is going on stage. So what the play has to do is to keep the attention of five hundred people.

They may be children or adults, what ever it is, this concentration of everyone to listen to what is happening – it is not a poem, where you write a poem to one person and that person might like it or reject it or what ever it is.

Third point, if it has to attract someone is, everyone must be interested in – what is the play about?What is the play about.

About play structures he has said:

Structures do not come naturally, you have to work at them. When Bhim Sen Joshi sings an intricate aalap, he does not do it because inspiration comes to him, there has been hours and hours of riyaz… A playwright has to do it too.. read other plays, analyze them and when you write .. write.. question them and so on. 

He ends the class with this crucial tip

Whether a play works or not, apart from the structure – it has to have genuine truth of experience. Fake emotions always show on stage.

……Do they convince you? That is what makes a great play

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Open Call – Dance and Theatre Festival Rampenlichter 2017

Rampenlichter 2017 – open call

Dear Arts and Culture Innovators,

Rampenlichter Dance and Theatre Festival for Children and Youth is celebrating its ten year anniversary in July 2017 and…

we are looking for young artists to take part in the largest dance and theatre festival to take place in Munich’s Creative Quarter. We are looking for productions large or small, quiet or loud, simple or spectacular featuring children and teenagers from Munich, Germany, and across the globe!

It would be greatly appreciated if you could help us spread the word by sharing our project description and application with interested parties by sharing our open call in newsletters and online.

From July 6 to 16, 2017in Munich’s Schwere Reiter Theater we are proud to present a platform for creative exchange for young artists from Munich, Germany, and beyond.

Featuring a large variety of dance and theatre productions, a series of performances for local school classes, evening performances, a diverse selection of workshops, our KunstSpielRaum (Art-Play-Space) program located on the festival grounds, and—as in other theatre festivals—Rampenlichter facilitates a space for artistic exchange between artists and audiences alike.

  • Rampenlichter provides dance and theatre groups with the opportunity to:
  • Present their artistic work to other groups, school classes, and the general public
  • A full, diverse program of productions throughout the festival
  • The opportunity to witness and learn new performance styles
  • To lead workshops for school classes and other groups
  • To take part in workshops lead by other groups and
  • Take part in an exchange of artistic and stylistic exchange

Our festival is aimed towards groups with full-length evening productions, as well as shorter dance and theatre productions.

More information is available in the attached PDF Call for Applications_Rampenlichter2017.

The application period is open until January 31, 2017 at http://rampenlichter.com/das-festival/bewerbung-2017/

Please contact us with questions or for additional information.

Thank you!

Best regards,

the Team of Rampenlichter

Rampenlichter_Call_for_Application_2017.pdf

Play: Catch the Sun

CATCH THE SUN

Based on Eric Carle’s book Walter the Baker

September 2015

Characters:

Walter the Baker, Anna, Walter Jr, Duke, Duchess, Cat, Mouse, Soldiers, Towns people, soldiers, narrators

Preview:

Everyone loves Walter the Baker’s rolls and pastries, especially the Duke and Duchess. But one day an unfortunate accident forces Walter to substitute water for milk in his sweet rolls, and the incensed Duke and Duchess present Walter with a challenge – create from one piece of dough a tasty roll that the sun can shine through three times, or be banished from the kingdom. What will Walter make?

Start 

Stage empty of actors.  Left of Stage, a table with two chairs. Right of stage a sign board that has an image of a pie. Towns people hurry about with empty baskets speaking..

Music:                       French Music in French Cafe: Best of French Cafe Music (French Cafe Accordion Traditional Music)

 

 

Narrator 01:               Hello, Hello, Hello! Hello to everybody in this audience. Welcome to our little town of Duchy! Our story opens here…. In this city of Duchy, and in this little lane, at the back of the main street, an old street where once there lived…..

(Narrator 02 runs from the audience)

Narrator 02:               Oh, storyteller, oh story teller, something is happening… I don’t understand….

Narrator 01:               What don’t you understand?

Narrator 02:               Why is everyone running in the direction of that street? Something is happening

Narrator 01:               yes, yes, something did happened.. this happens every morning…

Narrator 02:               …, and they seem to be smiling… so… hmmmmmm what is that aroma….? It is mouth water….

(Walks in the direction of the aroma….)

 

Narrator 01:               our story is set in this beautiful town of Duchy, where there lived Walter the baker, his wife Anna and their son Walter Junior…

This is the bakery where Walter works… he works every morning when the people of this town are still asleep…

He makes ….

Narrator 02:               ohhhhh…. cakes, tarts, breads, rolls, cookies and pies…. yummmmmmmmmm

Narrator 01:               Anna sells the baked goods in the store… run before they get all sold… no one can resist the warm, sweet

Narrator 02:               the sweet sweet smell of bread, and pies….

Narrator 01:               Wait.. wait.. you were saying…. Hahahaha, another one takes a cake walk….

Narrator 01:               Walter Jr…. Hey Walter Jr… off to meet the Duke and Duchess?

(enters the stage eating a piece of pie)

Narrator 02:               Duke and Duchess? What? Where?

Walter Jr:                    Yes yes…. The Duke and the Duchess who rule over the Duchy loved Walter’s sweet rolls… Every morning I carry basketful of warm sweet rolls to the castle and deliver it to them…

Oh look at the time… It is there there are… I better hurry

(the duke and the duchess come by and sit on the chairs)

Music:                       George Frideric Handel – Music for the Royal Fireworks

Narrator 02:               The Duke and the Duchess…. (shakes himself off well) I would like to visit and pay my respects…(bows to the Duke and the Duchess as Walter enters the space and serves them jelly rolls)

 

Duke:                          Hmmmmm (bites into their rolls)

Duchess:                    Ahhhh (eats her roll)

 

Narrator 02:               This happens every morning?

Narrator 01:               Every morning like clock work!

Narrator 02:               Perfect… perfect…. So happy….

Walter:                       Life is happiness indeed

I have everthing I need

Thought I bake all day and night

Narrator 02:               Looks like everything is alright.. everything is great…. Nothing could go wrong….

Narrator 01:               You spoke tooo soon…..

Narrator 02:               What did I say…

Narrator 01:               Everything was great and the same for most mornings…. Until one early morning….

Narrator 02:               What happened? Let us see…

Walter:                       Spring rolls to make… to make to make…

Fresh bread to bake to bake to bake

I need milk and eggs….

Eggs… ? Where did I leave the eggs…?

Walter… you are surely becoming forgetful…

I will leave the milk here and go get the eggs from the pantry….

(Enter Mouse)

Mouse:                        Oh I smell cheese … can I have some please…

It is some where here… may be there….

Cat:                             I smell a mouse… in the house… where is it…

In the kitchen I think….

(Cat and mouse see each other – chase – MUSIC : Chase Music , and topple the milk… as Walter enters)

 

Music:                       -Yakety Sax- Music

 

 

Walter:                       What? What? What happened here?

The milk…. Ahhhh? The milk… the fresh milk ….

What will I do? I cannot make sweet rolls without fresh milk…. Oh no…

Narrator:                    At that moment, he decided to try something new

Walter:                       Let me try something new… how about making (hesitantly) the same pie today… (hesitating)  a new recipe… life is always about experimenting … yes? Where better to experiement than in the kitchen… so I will experiment too today…

Since it is too late and too expensive to get all that milk..again… I will make the sweet role with water instead….

Anna + Walter Jr:      Water? Water?

Anna:                          Will it taste the same?

Walter Jr:                    Will the Duke and the Duchess like it?

Narrator 02:               Did the Duke and Duchess like it?

(Walter and N 1 + 2) turn towards the Duke and Duchess table…

 

D + D:                         Yuck!!! What…

Ugh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tasteless..

What is this?

Where is the baker? Bring Walter here soon!

(Walter went to the Duke, shaking in fright, as Anna and Walter Jr stood behind him)

 

Narrator 02:                           Oh no, the Duke does not look pleased

The Duchess seems to be fuming

Narrator 01:                           Shhhhhh!

Duke:                                      What do you call this?

Duchess:                                this this?

Duke:                                      this is not a roll,

Duchess:                                this feels like a stone….

Walter:                                   I….. I….

Duke:                                      I.. I… What?

Walter:                                   I was experimenting, with water instead of milk….

Duchess:                                Pack your things and leave this town

Leave Duchy forever!

I never want to see you again!

Walter:                                   I am so sorry.. but where will I go… this is my home… my home…Where will I go?

Please, Please, please give me one more chance….

Duke:                                      I must banish you…

I must, I must…

But I will give you another chance…

You did say you were experimenting, Inventing…

Now invent this:

A roll. With a piece of dough. It must taste good …

Walter:                                   Ok….

Duke:                                      I am not done…

Walter:                                   go on… your highness..

Duke:                                      The sun… the rising sun must shine three times through this roll.

Narrator:                                Look at them… they look so sad, dejected… what will Walter do?

Narrator 01:                           Walter did not take a break, a rest, even for a minute…

He made

Walter:                                   Long rolls, short rolls, sweet rolls, twisted rolls, fat rolls even salty rolls….

N1 + N2, A+ WJ:                    But alas! Nothing worked….

Walter:                                   Idea!

N1:                                          Then the had another idea,…

Walter:                                   I’ll beat, push and pound the dough.. oh no!!!

All in vain… let me try something new….

N2:                                          is it going to work? Yawwwwnnnn! I am going to sleep….

N1:                                          Wait for me….

(N1 and N2 EXIT yawning)

Walter:                                   its hopeless….

WJ:                                          What is he doing? He is throwing it to the ceiling…

Anna:                                      Oh no, it dropped …

WJ:                                          Father stop…. Motehr look….

Anna:                                      What?

WJ:                                          Look at how the dough….

Look at the shape father….

Anna:                                      It looks like the dough is praying too… for a miracle…

Walter:                                   Pop it into the oven….

Anna:                                      Into the oven it goes…

Walter Jr:                                now wait…

Music:

Anna:                                      Perfect, it is brown and crisp….

Walter Jr:                                its not risen very high, and made from one piece of dough

Walter:                                   What is more….

Anna:                                      Hold it up… hold it up…. Hold the twisted roll up…

Walter Jr:                                Look papa, mamma, we can see the sun shining through it three times…..

Walter:                                   (silence)

Anna:                                      Let me see…. Three big suns….

Walter:                                   (Silence… takes the pretzel) YIPPIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

(All the three dance and sing… yippie…)

 

Walter:                                   Life is happiness indeed….

I have everhting I need…

N1 and N2:                             Walter, Walter… the Duke and Duchess are arriving here….

What will you tell them?

I am getting so tensed….

(Enter Duke and Duchess – Walter smiles and hands the Duke the pretzel)

 

Duke:                                      Well Done Walter!

Duchess:                                Perfect!

Duke:                                      We have decided not to send you away!

Duchess:                                Now pray tell Walter, What do you call this?

Walter:                                   um… yes… Pray… Pray…

Duchess:                                Pray what? Pray…. Pretzel…..Pretzel it shall be….

(Duke holds up the pretzel…)

 

Duke:                                      From now on….this sweet roll shall be served in the morning,

Duchess:                                …and in the afternoon too…

Narrator 01:                           From that day on… Walter made Pretzels for everyone , day and night in his bakery.

The whole town got to taste the pretzels….

Walter Jr:                                A special basket of pretzels went everyday for the duke and the duchess…

Narrator 01:                           And everyone cheered Walter the Pretzel Maker!

Narrator 02:                           What a story!

~~~

Artist of the month: Lotte Reiniger

For the coming month’s display on the wall – ARTIST OF THE MONTH – I am looking at my other inspiration – LOTTE REINIGER. She is a woman, I would like to emulate. Lotte Reiniger’s work has captivated me since the first time I came across it. She communicates so well with her puppets and her simple sketches. Her papers are delicate and she just uses a scissor and none of the advanced tools that we use today.

Lotte 1

Even before any of the Disney movies came about, Lotte’s work was seen in Europe, and was pure in its artistic expression. They were based on classical stories like Cinderella, The Adventures of Prince Achmed . Her workmanship was perfect and all her puppets were complicated, with dynamic movements.

Here are some of her movies

Play for Beginners: Cinderella

REVOLTING RHYMES: CINDERELLA

Based on Roald Dahl’s Cinderella

For Drama Beginners

Stage Clear. Music Comes on.

All stage hands and three narrators gather around the narrators as the story begins.

Narrator 1:                                                 I guess you think you know this story.

(All stage hands nod their heads.)

Narrator 2:                                       You don’t.

(All stage hands look towards the main actor)

(NARRATOR 3):                              The real one’s much more gory.

(All stage hands go… making gory faces)

Narrator 1:                                                The phoney one, the one you know,

Was cooked up years and years ago,

Narrator 2:                                                And made to sound all soft and sappy

NARRATOR 3:                                 Just to keep the children happy.

(All stage hands go..awwww, so cute, sigh!)

Narrator 1:                                                Mind you, they got the first bit right,

The bit where, in the dead of night,

Narrator 2:                                                The Ugly Sisters,

Ugly Sisters:                                    jewels and all,

Narrator 2:                                      Departed (Claps her hands) for the Palace Ball,

(Narrators become chariot)

NARRATOR 3:                                 While darling little Cinderella,

(Sitara Ramanna comes walking in with a red chair and Cindy  gets on top of it)

Was locked up in a slimy cellar,

Cindy :                                             (Sigh) This is sooo sad.

NARRATOR 3:                                 Little Cinderella

Was locked up in a slimy cellar

Narrator 1:                                      Where rats who wanted things to eat,

Began to nibble at her feet.

Cindy :                                             Shoo! Help! Let me out!

Narrator 2:                                                The magic fairy heard her shout!

NARRATOR 3:                                 Appearing in a blaze of light

He said,

Fairy God Father :                         My dear, Are you alright?

Cindy :                                             All right? Can’t you see?

I feel as rotten as rotten can be.

Narrator 1:                                      She beat her fist against the wall and shouted…

Cindy :                                             Get me to the palace Ball

Music:                                     Some Bee Gees number

Cindy :                                             There is a disco in the palace

THERE IS A DISCO AT THE PALACE!

The rest have gone and I am jalous!

I want a dress! I want a coach!

And earrings and a diamond brooch!

And silver slippers, two of those!

And lovely bedazzled clothes!

Done up like that I’ll guarantee

The handsome Prince will fall for me!

Narrator 2:                                                The Fairy said,

Fairy God Father :                         Hang on a tick.

NARRATOR 3:                                 He gave the magic wand a mighty flick                                                        And quickly, in no time at all,

Narrator 1:                                                Cindy was at the Palace Ball!

Music:                                               Waltz

Narrator 2:                                      It made the Ugly Sisters wince, to see her dancing with the Prince.

NARRATOR 3:                                 She held him very tight and pressed /herself against his manly chest.

Narrator 1:                                      The Prince himself was turned to pulp, All he could do was gasp and gulp.

Prince :                                            Wait a sec, let me catch a breath.. am seeing spots, am I close to death?

Narrator 2:                                                Then midnight struck.

Sound Effect:                                   Clock Striking 12

Narrator 2:                                                Cindy shouted,

Cindy :                                             Heck! I’ve got to run to save my neck!’

NARRATOR 3:                                 The Prince cried…

Prince :                                            No! Alas! Alack!

NARRATOR 3:                                 He grabbed her dress to hold her back.

As Cindy shouted,

Cindy :                                             Let me go!

Narrator 1:                                      The dress was ripped from head to toe.

She ran out in her underwear,

Narrator 2:                                                And lost one slipper on the stair.

The Prince was on it like a dart,

NARRATOR 3:                                 He pressed it to his pounding heart,

Prince :                                            The girl this slipper fits,

NARRATOR 3:                                 he cried,

Prince :                                            Tomorrow morn shall be my bride!

I’ll visit every house in town

Until I’ve tracked the maiden down!

NARRATOR 3:                                 Then rather carelessly, I fear,

He placed it on a crate of beer.

Narrator 1:                                                At once, one of the Ugly Sisters,

The one whose face was blotched with blisters

UGS1:                                               that means you (to UGS2)

UGS2:                                               no you…

Narrator 1:                                                It is not her or her.. but the both of you

(Actor brings a barrel – UGS1 and UGS2 go around like they are playing dog and the bone)                                              

Sneaked up and grabbed the dainty shoe,

Narrator 2:                                                And quickly flushed it down the loo.

Sound Effect:                                   Flush of the Loo

Then in its place she calmly put

The slipper from her own left foot.

UGS1:                                               Evil Laugh!

NARRATOR 3:                                 Next day, the Prince went charging down

To knock on all the doors in town.

Narrator 1:                                                In every house, the tension grew.

Who was the owner of the shoe?

Narrator 2:                                                Thousands of eager people came

To try it on, but all in Narrator 3in.

NARRATOR 3:                                 Now came the Ugly Sisters’ go.

One tried it on. The Prince screamed,

Prince :                                            No!

NARRATOR 3:                                 But the sister screamed,

UGS1:                                               Yes! It fits! Whoopee! – So now you’ve got to marry me!

Narrator 1:                                      The Prince went white from ear to ear.

He muttered,

Prince :                                            Let me out of here.

UGS1:                                               Oh no you don’t! You made a vow!

There’s no way you can back out now!

Prince :                                            Off with her head!

Narrator 2:                                                The Prince roared back.

They chopped it off with one big whack.

This pleased the Prince. He smiled and said,

Prince :                                            She’s prettier without her head.’

NARRATOR 3:                                 Then up came Sister Number Two,

Who yelled,

UGS2:                                               Now I will try the shoe!

Prince :                                            Try this instead!

NARRATOR 3:                                 the Prince yelled back.

He swung his trusty sword and smack

Her head went crashing to the ground.

It bounced a bit and rolled around.

Narrator 1:                                                In the kitchen, peeling spuds,

Cinderella heard the thuds

Narrator 2:                                                Of bouncing heads upon the floor,

And poked her own head round the door.

Cindy :                                             What’s all the racket?

Narrator 2:                                                Cindy cried.

Prince :                                            Mind your own bizz,

Narrator 2:                                                the Prince replied.

Poor Cindy’s heart was torn to shreds.

Cindy :                                             My Prince!… He chops off heads!

How could I marry anyone

Who does that sort of thing for fun?

Narrator 1:                                                The Prince cried,

Cindy :                                             Who’s this dirty One??

Push her around, just for fun!

Narrator 1:                                                Just then, all in a blaze of light,

The Magic Fairy hove in sight,

And said swoosh and swish

Fairy God Father :                         Cindy! make a wish!

Wish anything and have no doubt

That I will make it come about!’

Cindy :                                             Oh kind Fairy,

This time I shall be more wary.

No more Princes, no more money.

I have had enough of people who act funny.

I’m wishing for a decent man.

Are they hard to find ? Do you think you can?’

Narrator 2:                                                Within a minute, Cinderella

(Talia appears)

Narrator 2:                                                Was married to a lovely feller,

A simple jam-maker by trade,

Who sold good home-made marmalade.

Their house was filled with smiles a    nd laughter

And they were happy ever after.

~~~

Curtain Call